Today is theme day in the blogathon world and the theme is Haiku's. According to wikihow, a haiku is meant to be “unfinished”
because the reader finishes the poem in her heart. I figure my poem is
unfinished because I don’t understand poetry and have about as much haiku
writing ability as my cat does. (Cat’s don’t have thumbs Focker).Traditionally
haiku’s are often related to nature and the seasons and are serious instead of
funny. If it’s funny it’s a ‘sentryu’ and not a ‘haiku’.
So here it
goes..out comes the fingers and toes to count syllables 5-7-5.
1. Running Grumpy
Running. Isn’t so good
When the hamstring is pulled tight
Making me grumpy
2. Hot Summer Running
Summer heat outside
Slows down my pace drastically
Woman pushing stroller passes
Here’s something I wrote a couple years ago in a class
3. The Teacup
The
child runs away
Towards
the warm inviting house
Giggling
with her friend
The
wind blows gently
Moving
the white speckled sand
Burying
lost treasures
Standing
in the sand
Sun
catches a silver glint
Pokes
a spoon handle
Peaking
from the sand
The
saucer broken in two
Abandoned.
Alone
The
blue tea cup sits
Half
covered in the cold sand
Awaiting
return
How about you? Do you Haiku? Can you write a running haiku?
1 comment:
I write about running but never tried a haiku. Clever!
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